翻译技巧5 句子和篇章层面的调整13-6-5.pptVIP

例句一： 凭窗站了一会，微微的觉得凉意侵入。转过身来，忽然眼花缭乱……（冰心：《微笑》，转自（《英译中国现代散文《雪》，123页）  原句括号部分有两处省略主语“我”。虽然没有主语，但原文读起来依然是通顺的汉语句子，增添的主语反而成了冗余的部分，使得原句臃肿啰嗦。而译文必须分别增添原文被省略的主语，才能语法正确，逻辑关系明确： 译文： Standing at the window for a while, I felt a bit chilly. As I turned round, my eyes suddenly dazzled before the bright light and could not see things distinctly.  施恩勿记，受恩勿忘。 其逻辑形式用英语表述则是： If you confer a benefit，never remember it； If you receive one，remember it always. 译文增补了两个连接词 “If”，表明从句和主句是条件和结果的逻辑关系，将汉语隐藏的形式逻辑的演绎推理显现出来。当英语转换成汉语时，则需要删减关联词。如： If winter comes, can spring be far behind?  冬天来了，春天还会远吗？  拆分/分译 Division 合并 Combination 形合意合 信息重组Information Restructuring 拆分/分译 Division City of Diverse Cultures, The Garden City, The Fun City and City for the Arts—these are some of the names given to Singapore to show visitors what this exciting destination can offer to visitors who want to indulge their senses on a holiday as well as those who have a wish to stay in Singapore. 多种文化之城、花园之城、乐趣之城、艺术之城—这些都是人们赋予新加坡的美称。无论是前来度假、想尽享其美的游客们，还是那些希望在新加坡居留的人们，这些美称都意味着新加坡城—一个令人兴奋的终点站—将会给他们带来什么。 羊肉泡馍 （Textbook P77) （1）牛羊肉泡馍的特点是肉嫩汤浓，香醇味美，食后再饮一小碗高汤，更觉余香满口，回味悠长，是一种高蛋白质、高碳水化合物、高能量的食品。（2）一年四季均可食用，冬季更佳。 Diced pancakes in mutton or beef broth (yangroupaomo or Niuroupaomo), better known as Pita Bread Soaked in Lamb Soup, is characterized by tender meat and delicious broth. If you drink a bowl of thin soup after taking it, you’ll get a lingering flavor in the mouth. Rich in protein and carbon dioxide, it is a special food of high-energy that can be taken all the year round, winter being the best season. Upstairs (textbook P76) (1)Upstairs, Montreal’s best jazz grill, is located in the heart of downtown. (2) Upstairs blends live jazz, great food, a friendly staff and a unique ambiance to give you a truly Montreal experience. (3) The menu appeals to all tastes. (4) From tapas, including the famous Upstairs calamari, to the grill, where you can feast upon such items as a perfectly rib steak or tasty BBQ ribs