高考写作专家指导.ppt

Assessment Practice of Writing --- How to write a news report ASSESSMENT structure The article is divided into parts and well organized. content All the details are included Everything is to the point(切题). Language Few spelling or grammatical mistakes. Advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）. Some complex sentence patterns（复杂句式）. Some proper linking/ transitional words(过渡词). Handwriting Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. when where who what detailed information Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. It was her devotion that made a great impact on us and motivated us to win the prize. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others, who has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and it is worthwhile for us to learn from her. By Chen Jie, School Newspaper detailed information comments 最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装），用英语为校报写一篇100---120个词的报道。 你的文章应包括下列要点： 1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 2.你的评论。 注意：1.文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。 2. 参考词汇：singing contest (歌咏比赛） costume 服装 your own thought and idea An Upside down Pyramid introduction main body comment Para1 Para2--3 Para4 Summary when, where, who, what Development of the event in detail People’s comments or action to be taken Appreciate Search Advanced vocabulary: Linking/transitional words: leisure time; spend…searching and selecting; deeply mov