大学英语四六级考试辅导ppt剖析.ppt

Proverbs I?can?because?I?think?I?can.?我行，因为我相信我行！ Never?say?die.?永不气馁!? Never?put?off?what?you?can?do?today? until?tomorrow.?今日事今日毕。 The?best?preparation?for?tomorrow?is? doing?your?best?today.?对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好！  Writing 完整性（completeness）； 统一性（unity）； 连贯性（coherence ）同一时态、逻辑顺序、连贯词、重复词、指代词. 主题句、关键词. There are two ways (for us)to know the world outside (out of the campus)．(主题句)Firstly，we may take the advantage of the media，such as reading the newspaper，(watching the television)，surfing on the internet and so on. (扩展句一)Secondly，it’s also good to take a part—time job，such as tutoring (or working for a software company)． (扩展句二)(Any of these methods will enable us to get in touch with society．)(结论句) 英语写作常见错误 一．?不一致（Disagreements）? 　　所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致　时态不一致及代词不一　致等．? 例．?When?one?have?money?,he?can?do?what?he?want?to?.? 　　(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)? 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has?;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致．? 改为：　Once?one?has?money?,he?can?do?what?he?wants?(to?do)? ? 二．?修饰语错位（Misplaced?Modifiers）? 　　英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例. I?believe?I?can?do?it?well?and?I?will?better?know?the?world?outside?the?campus.? 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末．? 英语写作常见错误 三．?句子不完整（Sentence?Fragments）? 　　在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．? 　　例?There?are?many?ways?to?know?the?society.?For?example?by?TV?,radio?,newspaper?and?so?on?.?  剖析：本句后半部分＂for?example?by?TV?,radio?,newspaper?and?so?on?.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．? 改为：There?are?many?ways?to?know?society?,for?example?, by?TV?,radio?,and?newspaper.?  英语写作常见错误 四．?悬垂修饰语（Dangling?Modifiers）? 　　所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At?the?age?of?ten,?my?grandfather?died.?这句中“at?the?age?of?ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明”?谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my?grandfather,?如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了．? 改为：? When?I?was?ten,?my?grandfather?died.? 例 To?do?well?in?college,?good?grades?are?essential.?  剖析：句中不定式短语?“to?do?well?in?college”?的逻辑主语不清楚．? 改为：? 　　To?do?well?in?