BJ_记叙文看图作文概要1.ppt

看图作文 高考作文评分细目 1. 下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。 注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整； ②短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）； ③参考词汇：货摊stand (n.);抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.) 内容要点： 1.公园，冰淇淋货摊旁 ,年轻妇女的包被抢 2.人们追赶抢包者 , 3.长排椅上坐着一位老人, 4.抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒, 5.两名警察逮捕抢劫者 , 6.妇女感谢老人,人们称赞老人的机智   How to write a picture story  Step2: Choose the correct main point or phrase for each picture. Step3: Put each group of  words into a sentence. (Pay attention to the correct verb form.) Step4: Choose correct connectives to join the sentences into a passage 昨天下午你到越秀公园游玩，刚好看到—个救人的过程。请根据下面所拍下的几幅照片，用英语写—篇报导，寄给“英文早报”。 要求：①字数约100，不包括已给出的开头部分。 ②最后一幅照片因底片曝光，请自行补充合理的情节，使报导完整。 Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake. Among them was a happy family. They were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was struggling and her parents cried out, “Help! Help!” It was obviously that they couldn’t swim at all. From nearby a young man immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already tired out. At last he carried her to the bank. She was saved! 　　How happy the parents were! Before they thought of thanking the young man, he had disappeared. * * 符合写作要求 6.对目的的要求 正确，工整 5.对书写的要求 流畅，顺畅的连接和转折 4.对语篇的要求 丰富 3.对词汇的要求 多样 2.对句式的要求 全面 1.对内容的要求 例文 One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted: “Stop thief! He’s snatched my bag! ”Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between t