短文改错点拨.pptVIP

I was in greatly pain at that moment. However, we seldom felt lonely or hopelessly. Finding information on the net is easily. great hopeless easy 13. Unfortunate, there are too many people injured in the accident. 14.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. Unfortunate应作状语，修饰整个句子，此时应为副词unfortunately 才可保持一致。 修饰名词，应为a wonderful time. 六．指代一致?? ? 用于指代的各类代词应在数、格、性 上与上下文保持一致。 15.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.? The Smiths 为一复数概念，故指代词也应为第三人称复数 their. 16. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 17. And I can’t forget the food you cooked for I. 此处应为作主语的关系代词which. 此处I 应作介词的宾语，故改为me 才可保持一致。 七．语态一致?? ? ?句中谓语动词或非谓语动词应与上下文语态保持一致。 例18．Books may be keep for four weeks. 与其主语Books相对应，此处应为被动语态，故keep应改为kept。 八．搭配一致?? ?? 句中的固定搭配应保持完整并与上下文一致。 例19. I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. 例20.I look forward to hear from you soon. ? 后跟从句，保持一致须用so…that结构这一固定搭配。as改为that. look forward to 中to 是介词，其后应为动名词hearing。 例21．But it didn’t matter that I would win or not. 例22．I have neither brothers nor sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. ? 与其后or not 保持一致时应用whether。 in any other words意为“换言之”，应为in other words。 九．逻辑一致 ?? 这是一种隐蔽性较强且年年必考的错误，检查时应通篇考虑，重点在therefore/however, and/but, 代词，肯定与否定，及here/there 等。 例23．She was smiling but nodding at me. ? 上下文看，应为She---my English teacher微笑且点头鼓励我，but 应为and。 例：The twins begin to hate this kind of work that can destroy his happiness. 例：He and his children felt tired but neither of them would stop to have a rest. 该句的主语是twins为复数形式，后面的代词his为单数形式与主语不一致，所以应把his改为their。 neither指“两个都不”，该句明显是指三个或三个以上的人，所以neither应改为none。 24.There is no TV in the house. Now someone at home reads instead. 25.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. 从上文可知，因为无电视可看，人人都只好读书，someone 改为everyone或everybody. 通读全文，都是用第一人称，这时突然用到they,显然不一致，应改为we.??? 短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。 名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少。 动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了。 连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。 介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到。 句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词。 语法句法均未错，逻辑推理