2011雅思强化写作课程 S15 TASK2-04 段落展开.pdfVIP

IELTS Writing Module S15 厦门新航道辜驰 雅思强化写作课程 15 supporting details Argumentative Essay paragraphs’ development 厦门新航道辜驰 Notice : • it will takes 3 hours in Normal speed. • 本课件内容 1对1（6分水平学员）执行时讲 解为教师们的平均课时为 3小时；强化课程 进度强度会偏快！ • 1对1请教师增加举例范例+练习+词汇课 程 4-6小时 • 附录: 考官提醒-- 大陆学生雅思写作应注意的原则 • Principle 1: Anything that helps examiner to do their job, helps your mark; • Principle 2: You should be careful about including examples from everyday life to illustrate a point (try to present anecdotal evidence in an illustrative rather than narrative way.); • Principle 3: If you don’t relate the examples you are making to back to the question or premise, it’s very possible that examiners will not see why you included that point no matter how obvious it seems to you; •Do •do not Evidence 1 Example 2 Facts and figures 3 Comparison and contrast Evidence 4 Explanation 5 Inference 6 Causes and effects 厦门（中心句）鼓浪屿（例子） • 美好的事物[中心句] 美好的（视觉）东西 美丽的花美丽的玫瑰花【举例】 • How should we say ? • 中心句 • …主题.……produces/brings… 效果 (比如，美好的事物[中心句])….. to………人…… 展开基本 Basic thinking pattern •What is it？ •VS •Why is it？ • Advertisements pose risks of …over -consumption…on consumers. • 练习： • [1]提高汽油价格可以解决城市空气污染. • [2]更多的关心时尚给学生带来情感的伤害. 【中心句范例】 Advertisements Pose risks of …over - consumption…on consumers. • Advertisements over-consumption? • Why ? • 【学生例子】for example, advertisements make a lot of things to tell us to buy thing, sometimes we are happy to buy these，sometimes we are not and so we are told to buy, buy anything, buy ever