基础写作-人物介绍.ppt

亚伯拉罕.林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky。 eg. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 查理.狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。 Born of a poor clerk’s family, Charles Dickens had little schooling. 请根据表格中所提供的信息， 写一篇介绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。 【实例剖析：】 【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第 人称 【实例剖析：】 短语及句型： be born in, Join the Chinese Air Force be sent into space Shenzhou V spacecraft Land safely China’s national flag United Nations’ flag 报纸32期基础写作 Yangliwei , born in Liaoning Province in 1965, became a pilot in the Chinese Air Force in 1987. After 5 years of training , he was sent into space at 9 am on October 15th in 2003 by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft , which orbited the earth 14 times. After about 21 hours in space, he landed safely the next day. In space Yang recorded everything he saw. He showed Chinese national flag and the United Nations’ flag to the people watching on TV at home. 32 期报纸读写任务 This passage mainly tells us the important role parents plays in their children’s education. Parents should always encourage their children and help them learn something from failure. In my opinion , parents can play a very important role not only in children ‘s life but also in their education. If the parents are strict, their children will surely take their study more seriously. If a child is often encouraged by his parents, he will certainly be more confident. Take myself as an example, when I was in Junior 1, I did very badly in an English exam and I felt very sad. I thought I wasn’t able to learn English well. After my mother learnt about it, she told me to be patient. She said she believed I could do better if I worked harder and was more careful the next time. Her comfort and encouragement was of great help to me and now I do much better at English. 【基础写作实例剖析：】 你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍 自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。 【实例剖析：】 【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文