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Criteria for a good essay Task 1: group discussion How to write a good essay in English? 1. unity (统一性) 2. coherence (连贯性) 3. variety (多样性) 4. conciseness (简洁性) 5. wording (用词) 6. grammar 7. spelling 1. unity (统一性) 2. coherence (连贯性) 3. variety (多样性) 4. conciseness (简洁性) 5. wording (用词) 6. grammar 7. spelling 1. Unity (统一性) 1. unity in sentences 句子的统一性 A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It does not contain ideas that are not closely related, nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself. Eg: With the development of science and technology, more and more college students have the psychological problems revised: With the development of science and technology, which incurs the fast pace of life, along with increasing pressure, more and more college students have the psychological problems 2. Fast food is harmful to the health which can lead to cancer. Revised: fast food, to some extent, is harmful to the health if you talk in excessive fat and calories, which easily contributes to overweight. 1. unity in paragraphs (段落中的一致性) A paragraph is unified when all the sentences in the paragraph are focused on one central thought or on a single topic. When you write a paragraph, be sure that each sentence contributes to the theme, and any irrelevant information is excluded. 1. In China, Christmas is also popular over the country. Whether it is considered to be fashionable or a real festival, it is a cultural communication . At Christmas, people can benefit from it, achieving a leisure period, a good mood and an enjoyable evening. 3. Global warming can be attributed to the increasing carbon dioxide emitted into the air. Many factories and cars take most of responsibilities for it because they give off incredible amount of CO2. There is also some poisonous gas which poses great threat to our health, namely the air pollution. 2. coherence (连贯性) Coherence means clear and reasonable connection between parts. A sentence is c