作文讲座(第二讲如何增加亮点).pptVIP

作文专题讲座 高考英语作文高分策略 第二讲：如何增加亮点(Ⅰ) 霍山中学 万直明 1、交叉使用长句与短句 【例】中午我们在太阳下吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱歌的唱歌，跳舞的跳舞，还有的讲故事、下棋，大家玩得很开心。 〔一般句〕At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sand and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 〔优秀句〕At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories and playing chess. 2.避免同一词语的重复使用 【例】我喜欢读书，而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。 〔一般句〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television. 〔优秀句〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 3.适当使用短语代替单词： 【例】她不喜欢运动。 〔一般句〕She doesn’t like sports. 〔优秀句〕She cares nothing for sports. 【例】我的家乡正在修建一条新铁路。 〔一般句〕A new railway station is being built in my hometown. 〔优秀句〕A new railway station is under construction. 【例】他已决定长大了当老师。 〔一般句〕He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. 〔优秀句〕He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up. 或者： He has been determined to be a teacher when he grows up. 4.能用被动不用主动 【例】如果你能考虑我的申请，我将非常感激。 〔一般句〕I’d appreciate it if you can consider my application seriously. 〔优秀句〕I’d appreciate it if my application could be taken into serious consideration. 〔优秀句〕Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. 5.巧用用倒装句 【例】只有这样你才能把这项工作做好。 〔一般句〕You can do it well only in this way. 〔优秀句〕Only in this way can you do it well. 【例】只有你坚持不懈，你才能够取得巨大成功。 〔一般句〕If you have persistence, you can achieve great success. 〔优秀句〕Only if you have persistence, can you achieve great success. 〔一般句〕The time is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it. 〔优秀句〕So precious is the time that we cannot afford to waste it. 〔一般句〕I am so interested in the position that I want to apply for it. 〔优秀句〕So interested am I in the position that I would like to apply for it. 6.适当运用非谓语动词 【例】由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。 〔一般句〕As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. 〔优秀句〕Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. 7.合理安排复合句、大胆使用独立主格结构与