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2010 第一节：短文改错 After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ” (拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully. 21世纪教育网 1. notice 改为noticed 解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。 2. occupy改为occupied 解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。 3. young之前加上a。解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。 4.clearly改为clear。解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。 5. on改为by或at。解析：被桌子挡住了，应用by或at。 6．Put改为putting。解析：此处是分词短语作伴随状语。此时是主谓关系，故用putting。 7. many改为much。解析：此处是回忆，不可数名词，所以用many。 8. 去掉to。解析：accept之后不需要接to。 9. So 改为But。解析：根据前后关系，应表示转折关系。 10．me改为I。解析：作主语，应用主格。 第二节：书面表达 最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气的炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装），用英语为班级板报写一篇100—120个词的短文。 你的文章应包括下列要点： 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 2.你的评论。 参考词汇：singing contest 歌咏比赛 costume 服装www.ks*5u.co One possible student version Star Student of the Week21世纪教育网 Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping