高三英语短文改错与作文复习题11.docVIP

短文改错+写作（11） 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Mr Wang, We’re so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views. In the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we have real mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for those important points w