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作文题目：your help needed 写一倡导信 希望社会对某个病人进行捐助，该病人是你们学校的一名学生 目前病情及家庭情况2、经济困难3、希望被捐助’m writing to you, on behalf of the student union, to ask for help for our schoolmate, Li Ming. He’s seriously ill and has to have a lung transplant at once. To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country, which means that his family is quite poor. Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties. To begin with, he can’t afford the medical expenses. His family doesn’t have a good financial background and moreover, his parents have already borrowed a lot of money to send him to university. In view of their low income and severe financial situation, we hope you can show your sympathy. In addition, his family is far away and he needs someone to take care of him day and night instead of his parents who are thousands of miles from here. Only under careful care can our friend recover from his disease. On no account can we see our friend suffer without giving him a hand! He’s in desperate need of your help, especially in financial donations to help pay his expenses. Anyone who wants to offer help can contact us ator you can email us by love@. Please act without delay! Yours sincerely Zhang Hua Chairman of the student Union 1.Appropriate use of high-level vocabulary 2.Appropriate use of various types of sentences: simple, compound, complex/ narration, exclamation, inversion/ parenthesis, attributive clauses 3. clear and logical organization, good coherence 4.Correct format Ask first, explain later 11 points （清清楚楚） Dear friends, Xiao Ming is a student of our university. He is one of the top students in the class, but last year he got cancer. Since then, his life had changed a lot. He couldn’t go to school as usual and his parents can no longer afford the medicine expenses. Xiao Ming’s father is a worker with a low salary. His mother is out of job and in order to take care of the son, she cannot leave to find a job. Now all the savi