英语作文点评课件.pptVIP

作文评讲;1、审清题意（人称、时态、词数、文体格式） 2、分析要点，划分段落（Introduction—Main body --- Conclusion) 3、用英文列出要点，加强句式的改写(so…that; it+adj’ to do sth. ; not only … but also ; because/ so ; although/but;if/unless/ when引导的状语从句） 4、确立每个段落开头的主题句。然后在确当的上下文中间插入连接上下文的词：What’s more, at the same time, as a result , what’s worse. On the other hand ,in addition , in my opinion …) 5、规范誊写作文（最好无涂改）。 ;评分标准 第一档.?内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，有复杂句三句且上下文顺畅，书写规范，给17-20分； 第二档.?内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，语言较平实，书写较规范，给13-16分； 第三档.?内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给8-12分； 第四档.?只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给一些同情分;Some students think it’s good for animals to keep them in zoos. First, people can get a closer look at wild animals. Second, they believe that it helps people love animals and nature. At the same time, zoos can provide homes for endangered animals., as a result, zoos can keep them safe from danger. Some students are against it ., for they think it’s a waste of money and labour to keep animals in zoos and the ecological balance will be broken. What’s worse , the animals can’t move freely in nature. In my opinion, we can save endangered animals only if we save their natural habitats. Therefore, I suggest protecting animals natural habitats and return them to nature one day . ;…We often get angry for no reason and even don’t talk to them for days . Why do we behave like this ? First , our parents care about our marks so much that it makes us very stressed. Second ,We are unwilling to communicate with them , As a result , we don’t understand each other any more. It’s time for us to change . First, we can communicate with them by sharing our joys and worries with them. In addition, it’s necessary to help them do some housework to show our love to them . Finally , we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they don’t feel worried about us . ; 中考英语写作评分标准;审题：？----时态---？三个景点---时间、 理由、活动 段落-----主题句----句式的变换----复杂句---上下文的衔接;;;写出提示句： People go to school and learn/ people study/ people take tests/ lear