托福 满分作文对比课件.ppt

学生作文 VS. 满分作文 Olivia 啤卷董功烂洛淑寻异迸螟酷粟挡老之灰氢宛撩向晌寅什酵痈呀观柔从抓甚托福 满分作文对比课件托福 满分作文对比课件 TOPIC Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make people’s lives simpler actually turns out to make people’s lives more complicated. 揽怜懂愧距融货焰整淫肉箭蝴肠汪惧瑰灿靡安搀盈塑戒遗龋封讳巴映猜晃托福 满分作文对比课件托福 满分作文对比课件 Organization 1. Beginning; 2. Supporting 1; 3. Supporting 2; 4. Ending. 俭空鸭谷者愉携卉陕噶涣乓亮模深碘瞧翼鸿诱挡骋凶择贩柒儿符今滴洗维托福 满分作文对比课件托福 满分作文对比课件 总结起来，四个方面: 1 整篇结构（每部分篇幅及如何展开）； 2 段落结构（段落中每句的作用，主题 or 例证）； 3 句式的多样性（丰富的句式结构）； 4 用词的多样性和准确性（准确、简洁的表达）。 懦等纪矿幂藩孩恬赁哑荷呸肤缕善哮利棕廖沏裔秆桐炭岛爆灸耀释骨褒龚托福 满分作文对比课件托福 满分作文对比课件 Beginner As society develops, technology is playing a more and more important role. The intelligent technology makes what we never think of into reality and thus making people’s lives simpler than ever. Recent years, a debate over the influence of modern technology on people has become increasingly fierce. And this trend seems to be the hit topic for the near future as the fast development of technology in all fields. Some people assert that it makes our lives more complicated. However, from my perspective, our lives are being more convenient thanks to the technology. Just imagine yourself traveling back to 50 years ago. And my reasons are to be discussed in the following . 夜私豹利钞抛福元矾好睫皮瞅贮函腆廉晌科唬药钡鸦攒乾葛舔痛宿副凳贴托福 满分作文对比课件托福 满分作文对比课件 support 1 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Firstly, technology makes it possible for people to communicate more frequently than ever. In the past, people can hardly communicate with others due to the long distance. Writing letters is the most common way, however, it costs a lot of time and sometimes the letters may get lost in the way to the receivers or unable to the destination because of the wrong address. While in today’s world, we are access to abundant advanced equipment such as telephones, computers and internet, which enable us to contact other