0226写作课件.ppt

论点/中心句C I would say that it all depends on different situations of every individual or what specific academic field it is. C 论据1 For some teachers without doctorates who have demonstrated in their work their teaching and research competence, going back to school for a higher degree is a waste of time and energy. 论据2 As for some who found themselves struggling at work because of their lack of academic ability, they should further their study for a doctorate. C 结尾 It is not wise to generalize about university teachers without PhDs. Decisions should be made through sound thinking. Problematic Sentences 1. With the development of economics, a large number of rural dwellers have left for cities. With the development of economy, a large number of rural dwellers have left for cites. 2. There are many students play football on the sports ground. There are many students playing football on the sports ground. There are many students who are playing football on the sports ground. 3. The football match has been postponed Because it is raining today. The football match has been postponed because it is raining today. 4. It is important to exercise because everybody seems to watch us if you are fat and out of shape. It is important to exercise, because everybody seems to watch us if we are fat and out of shape. 5. I did not know what was happened in the classroom. I did not know what had happened in the classroom. 6. As an individual, there are many things we can do to protect our environment. As individuals, many things we can do to protect our environment.  As an individual, we can do many things to protect our environment.  As an individual, I can do many things to protect our environment. As individuals, we can do many things to protect our environment. 7. The average life span in the 1980’s was much longer than 1880’s. The average life span in