四级英语作文多变的句式概要.pptx

评卷实例:请思考高分作文特征 实例一 英文题目：Bicycles——An Important Means of Transport in China 汉语提纲： (1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及 (2)和汽车的比较 (3)自行车在中国的前途 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”. popular-- popularity 首句升级： In China, bicycles have gained great / wide popularity among the public. 注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。 简单句长难句 In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. 高分句式1：双重否定 结构：No ___ is/are more ____ than ___. 原句： Bicycles are very popular in China. 升级： In China, no means of transport is more popular and common than bicycles. ` Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 写作用词积累 常用理由： 便宜： cheap / economical / inexpensive 方便： convenient/ convenience / inconvenience 对…有益 be good/ beneficial/ rewarding for In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. In my opinion  I am convinced that …  To my understanding, appropriate inappropriate  appropriately 高分特征： 1.内容相关 （切题即可） 2.结构清晰 （新闻联播三段论） 3.语言精彩 （连贯、通顺、词句多变） 如何做到内容切题和结构清晰？ 3步法： a.审读英文指令（和汉语提纲） b.将三提纲转化为英文句子充当主题句 (若提纲是两个则添加一个或拆分其中之一) c.将主题句扩展成英文段落 语言精彩 句子结构词多变： a.遣词 b.造句 If there is anyone out there who still d