2011广一模英语大作文佳作赏析和点评.pptVIP

2011广一模美句美文欣赏与朗读; 信息点整合条理清晰，首句开门见山, 简洁明了，重点突出。交待题目要点“存在问题：目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重”并且“进行‘治堵方案大家谈’的讨论”。 The English forum of our school had a discussion about the problems of traffic jams and severe pollution in our city. 用词准确，搭配得当，句型多样，连贯流畅。如： In order to solve these problems, the forum put forward several solutions, one of which is that people should drive private cars less often and carry as many people as possible in each car. (使用了不定式以及非限制性定语从句) What’s more, the government is supposed to develop/ improve the public transportation systems more efficiently to provide more convenience for citizen