高三语文-情景作文复习课件.pptVIP

* 2010届高三第一次月考（2009.9.29） 作文讲评 第一篇 你的家长给你买了一台电脑作为新年礼物，请你根据下列信息写一篇文章给校刊投稿谈谈电脑给你的生活带来的变化。 使用学习软件/上网校，提高学习成绩。 从网上收集学习资料,搜索信息，增长知识。 3. 给朋友发邮件。 4. 玩游戏，聊天。 审题 注意： 1. 文章包括以上要点，可适当发挥。不要逐条翻译。 2. 词数100以内，开头已给出。 第一篇 构思 一般现在时为主体时态。 快捷交流 发邮件 业余时间、放松娱乐 游戏，聊天 增长知识 收集资料 提高成绩 上网校 时间、方式、结果、目的 主要活动 第一篇 用词 快捷交流 发邮件 业余时间、放松娱乐 游戏，聊天 增长知识 收集资料 提高成绩 上网校 时间、方式、结果、目的 主要活动 go to net school use software Improve my grads collect info. surf the net increase my knowledge broaden my horizon send e-mails to communicate easily make it easy to talk with play PC games chat with… in my free / spare time For fun / relaxation 第一篇 用词问题 冠词： 介词： 名词： 副词： the computer search for … through/on the net send…to… knowledge information 不可数 I also can I can also 第一篇 句型 并列句 状语从句(时间、目的…) 定语从句 感叹句 the more…the more… 第一篇 分享 1. The more I use it, the more I love it. 2. I can find sth I need for my lessons. 3. It makes my learning more enjoyable. 4. Not only can it help me with my study, it can also make me feel relaxed. 5. A chat online usually sets me free from the stress of school work. 第一篇 警示 1. I am learn sth. in the net. 2. The computer is change my life. 3. …to my friends who is go abroad. 4. I can also chatting with my friends. 5. I can surfing the internet. 6. …so that improve my study. 根除非法句式 情态动词+原形动词 so that + 完整句子; in order to do 第二篇 开放作文 第二篇 审题 要点： 1. 找工作。 2. 好工作要求高。 3. 全面发展，举例说明。 4. 联系自己的学习。 第二篇 语言 It is hard for sb to do 2. Many qualities are needed for a good job, such as… 3. The more advantages you have, the easier you can get a job. 4. As students, we should try to learn more at school. 第二篇 欣赏 [赵梦可] Simple as the picture is, it reveals a common phenomenon in our society. [张彧杰] …, more and more people find it hard to get a suitable job because most companies just employ people who have many high abilities. [宋甜] Living in the modern society, we should not ignore our personal skills. 第二篇 欣赏 [高珊] Therefore，we need to study hard an