写作总结06517.ppt

Compare the Following Sentences We should use different ways to get to know the society. We ought to make use of various methods to get to know the society. We are supposed to take advantage of diverse means to get to know the society. 选词的基本原则 尽量用四级的积极的,活跃的，常用的词或词组 。 尽量用表达最贴切,最生动,最有力的词或短语 。 尽量用最符合所写话题,所用文体的词或表达。 四级考生在措词方面 存在的问题： 1 可供“调遣”的词汇量贫乏，用词大部分局限于中学词汇。 Eg. Good points= benefits, advantages, merits. Problems, bad points= drawbacks, disadvantages, shortcomings, defects. 2 表达相近意义时，常重复用一个词，用词单调。 Eg. Good= helpful, useful, beneficial, favorable, advantageous, does good to, benefit. 策略 1 调动大学期间学过的更生动，更丰富的词汇表达意思。 Eg. Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, give rise/birth to 2 用具体，生动，有针对性的词语。 Eg. Use, make use of, make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) use of sth, take (full) advantage of 3 文中如需要多次表达同一词义时，以原词，同义词，近义词等避免重复使用同一词。 Eg. Adapt to, adjust, make…fit, get used to, be accustomed to 主题句的写法-Analyze the following writing To be an educated person is not easy. Firstly we should know clearly the purpose of being educated. Secondly, we should be diligent and persistent, trying our best to overcome all the difficulties that we come across. Lastly, we should not only educate ourselves, but also help others as much as possible to acquire knowledge and skills. Generally speaking, an educated person will have more responsibility for his country and the society. Topic sentence 主题句又称主旨句或关键句，是一个段落中最重要的句子，是段落的“纲”。说明段落的中心思想和作者的写作目的，是段落发展的依据。 段落的每句话都应紧密地联系主题句所表达的中心内容。 写好主题句是文章成功的关键。 主题句的构成 Topic sentence = a topic + a controlling idea about the topic 主题句=主题+中心思想 主题：段落所谈的话题，问题 中心思想：限定话题的范围，确定话题的发展方向。整个段落都以这个中心思想为依据，围绕它进行。中心思想用关键词(key words)来表达。 Examples: please identify the two parts Developing private cars in China has many positive aspects. Keeping pets is beneficial to people in several aspects. Smoking results in a series of negative effects. The following factors contribute to success. The reasons why bicycles are so popular in Ch