第10周四六级写作.ppt

谋篇布局（ 5 ） 将提示中的第一句作为文章的第一段，并提出主题； 举例说明自己的观点； 结论重述主题 例子 标题： On Punctuality 　　 提示： 1 ） 准时在现代生活中仍然很重要； 2 ） 试举例说明 In our modern life, punctuality is one of the most important qualities that any person should possess. Punctuality demonstrates that you are reliable and can be trusted with responsibilities. Besides, it can make a person a good man. And if you are not punctual, you may injure others.  We should practice punctuality for the sake of others, as well as ourselves. He who is punctual will accomplish far more in a day than he who is not so. Washington was remarkable for this virtue. His mother had taught him, when a boy, or have certain hours for every employment, and to do everything at the appointed time. This habit helped, in his later life, to make him a good man. Without it, he could never have made such success.  Neglect of punctuality may injure both to others and to oneself. An applicant may be turned away just for the sake of being late for the interview. Students coming late for class will undoubtedly interrupt the teacher. Therefore, we ought never to say It is only once --- I will not do so again to excuse ourselves; otherwise we will be tardier and we will fail in our society.  In a word, if we form the habit of punctuality at school, it will be of great advantage to us in our future life. 段落拓展方法 1．事实与数据法 事实（a fact）是可以客观证实的事情。例如：“The sunrises in the east．”是个事实。“Oil and water do not mix．”也是个事实。两者都可以通过实验证明是真实的。但是“Eating carrots improves eyesight．”也许是真实也许是不真实的。这不是个事实，是一种看法（opinion）。数据（a statistic）是一个数字事实（a numeral fact），用于给某一主题提供有意义的信息。例如：There are twenty－five students in the class．”是一个数据。 示范段落1 The term population explosion is usually applied to the rapid growth of population over the last three centuries．In the two hundred years from 1650 to 1850，world population doubled and reached its first billion．In the next eighty years，it doubled again，and by 1975，it had doubled once more to a total of 4 billion．By the ye