改写-持枪歹徒落入法网-Guman Flees to Ningbo, Walks..docVIP

改写:持枪歹徒落入法网-Guman Flees to Ningbo, Walks. 持枪歹徒落入法网 【内容提示】 下面是一篇记叙文，叙述了一个持枪歹徒抢劫上海一家银行、杀死一人逃往宁波，后被警察捕获的事。请你在阅读后把它改写成新闻报道。 Guan Flees t Ningb, als int Plie eb (网) Zhu adi, a an ashier (出纳员) f Dalian Rad Branh Ban, as n dut during the lunh brea (午休时间), Nveber 16,1987 ust after she finished reeiving a depsit (一笔存款) fr the neighburing bstre, a gunan (持枪歹徒) sht at her ith a pistl At that ent, the an ler f the bstre, h had ust handed ver the ne t the ashier, as ust stepping ut f the ban dr hen she heard the sund f the explsin Turning ba, she ae fae t fae ith a ung an dashing ut (冲出) fr the ban＇s side-dr arring a glistening pistl (闪亮的手枪) The an ler iediatel telephned the inident (事件) t the plie statin Plie arrived ithin inutes f the alar, and the viti (受害者), h as ling n the grund in a pl f bld, as rushed t a nearb hspital here she died fr a bullet und (枪伤)that ut deep int her head fr the fae The plie traed (追踪) the gunan dn t the astal it, Ningb, here he sught refuge (寻找藏身处) under the rf f his fianee＇s (未婚妻的) aunt At a departent stre, the an still arring t pistls, and se aunitin (弹药) hen t plie ffiers ae upn hi and handuffed(戴上手铐) after a seven-da breathless anhunt (追捕) The an turned ut t be a 24-ear-ld apprentie ndutr (学徒售票员) u Shuangge n it bus N 7 in Shanghai （取材于《上海学生英文报》1987年12月8日第一版） 【作文示范】 Gunan Flees t Ningb, als int Plie eb Plie arrested 24-ear-ld u Shuangge in Ningb n Nveber 23, exatl a ee after he staged an ared ban rbber in Shanghai illing a an ashier u as traed dn b plie at a departent stre in the astal it here he sught refuge under the rf f his fianee＇s aunt He as still arring t pistls and se aunitin hen t plie ffiers ae upn hi and handuffed hi after a seven-da breathless anhunt n Nveber 13, three das befre the ban rbber, he stle three pistls and 268 bullets Sine last August he has been an apprentie ndutr n it Bus N 7 N ared, he ade a daring attept t rb a Dalian Rad Branh Ban, next t the Shanghai Freign Language Eduatin Bstre ust utside the apus f the Shanghai