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改写:给母亲的信-A Letter to Mother 给母亲的信 【内容提示】 1）下面是一段对话。根据对话内容，从对话后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项是多余的。 ane is nt ell She is at the dtr＇s Dtr: Gd rning1 ane:2But I have a teperature f 38 Dtr: And ther spts (病症)? ane: I＇ feeling ver tired, and I＇ ahing all ver I＇ve been sneezing (打喷嚏) a lt I＇ve als gt a sre thrat (喉咙痛) Dtr: It sees that u＇ve aught the flu that＇s ging arund here Let e l at ur thrat and he ur pulse rate ane:3 Dtr: ell it es and it ges Nthing but a fe das＇ rest an help u ba n ur feet I＇ll rite u a presriptin (处方) Are u allergi (过敏) t an drugs? ane:4 Dtr: Then have this filled at the heist＇s Sta indrs, eep ar, drin a lt f ater ane: Than u, dtr A．Is it serius? B．hat sees t be the truble? ．u＇ll get ell in n tie D．I dn＇t agree ith u E．I＇ nt sure F．Des it e and g? G．I dn＇t thin s 答案：1．B2．E3．F4．G． 2）根据对话内容写一封信。情况是： After ane＇s visit t the dtr, ane rte a letter t her ther, h as ut f tn Nte that the letter shuld inlude the flling pints: ①hat is rng ith ane? ②H did the dtr exaine her? ③hat did the dtr thin f her truble? ④hat treatent did the dtr suggest t ane? 【作文示范】 A Letter t ther April 6th Dear ther, I feel bad tda I sa the dtr At first I tld hi I had a fever and felt ver tired I as ahing all ver and gt a sre thrat The dtr thught I aught the flu that＇s ging arund here Then he led at thrat and heed pulse rate After that he tld e there as nthing serius He ased e t have a fe das rest and drin re ater At last he gave e se ediine I thin I＇ll get ell in n tie Dn＇t rr abut e ur daughter, ane 【写法指要】 1）这是女儿给母亲写的一封信。信的内容是根据上述对话中ane找Dtr看病的经过写的。所以，信文实际上是一篇过程说明文（press analsis essa）。过程说明文最显著的特点就是用表示时间先后顺序的衔接词语连贯全文，如本文中的“at first”，“then”，“after that”，“at last”就是这样的词语。 2）把对话改写成短文时，最重要的一点就是把直接引语变成间接引语。这时，就要注意正确使用如文中的“I tld hi (that)…”，“The dtr thught (that)…”，“…he tld e (that)…”，“He ased e t…”等具有转述功能的句型。此外，还须注意人称代词、指示词、时间或地点副词的转换和应用。