【走向高考·】高考一轮总复习外研版 天津·山东：写作进行时.doc

写作进行时(七)　看图类作文 一、图表作文 [技巧点拨] .写作要点 纵观近几年的高考书面表达试题，图表类作文是当今高考英语书面表达的常考题型之一，此类题型要求考生根据数据进行分析与讨论，得出令人信服的结论，或者对这一结论进行评价。 A．柱状图作为直观形象展示数据变化的手段之一，常常在高考英语书面表达试题中出现。而柱状类议论文要求考生要具备一定的数据分析能力，要能够通过对宽度相等的柱形的高度的比较来判断事物的动态发展趋势。 B．英语曲线图作文实际是一篇“解说词”，即通过曲线图提供的信息，分析图中数据，综合推断出文章的主题。 C．解答此类试题时，要认真观察坐标系信息，抓住变化趋势，结合提供的时间和数据参照寻求切入点。然后根据变化过程，尽可能利用所给的文字信息进行分类、比较、总结。 另外，写作过程中不必要将图中全部数据信息加以描述，只需将典型内容加以分析。 .写作模板 As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，________has been on rise/decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from________in________to________in________. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for______. On(the)one hand，________. On the other hand，________is due to the fact that________. In addition，________is responsible for________. Maybe there are some other reasons to show________. But it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that________.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. [习作点评] 以下是某英文报联合你校对你市(Kangming City)2001年到2013年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，作为文字说明。词数120～150。 The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 10,000 yuan per year in 2001 to 23,000 yuan in 2013. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has_been_changed,_too. 【此处应该使用现在完成时的主动形式has changed。】These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 2001, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In_2013,_expenses_on_housing_rose_to_42_percent. 【在该句前应该使用While表示前后两种情况的对比。】Food and drink is the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 2001, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In_2013,_the_figure_grew_ by_30%.【在此句前应该添加Whereas表示对比，同时又与前面的while不同，显示用词表达的多样性。】As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have reduced from 57% in 2001 to 2