W2-3(饼状图作业分析)`.pptVIP

IELTS PREPARATION COURSE Writing module REVIEW FOR TIME 1. 消磨时间 2. 诱人的 3. 上瘾的 4. 自控 5. 逃课 6. 辍学 7. 学习表现 8. 不成熟的 9. 沉迷于 10. 占用 11. 生产力 12. 效率 13. 制止 LINE CHART 饼状图 描写饼状图只需要记住以下三点： 总体与部分的关系 部分与部分的关系 比较多饼之间（多饼图） ASSIGNMENT You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below show the changes in the marital status of Canadians aged 15 and over in 1901 and 1996. Writ a report for a university lecturer describing the information on the graph. You should write at least 150 words. PROBLEM 1 Tense 时态 1901或者1996年统计的数据用什么时态？ Bad example: “According the pie chart, married which is 52.1% is the most popular among the marital status in 1901.” PROBLEM 2 Subject 主语 到底谁是主语？Married, Divorced等等是adj. 可以做主语么？ BAD EXAMPLE “According the pie chart, married which is 52.1% is the most popular among the marital status in 1901.” 改：According to the pie chart, the married Canadians, which accounted for 52.1%, occupied the most proportion among all kinds of marital status in 1901. PROBLEM 3 Vocabulary Variety 能否不只用account for 表达饼状图占据比例的所有说法？ BAD EXAMPLE “In 1901 and 1996, married Canadians accounted for more than 50%. In 1901, single Canadians accounted for 41% and divorced people accounted for 0.5%. But in 1996, separated people and common-law people accounted for 2.6% and 8% respectively. ” 可替代词： Represent Make up Occupy Constitute… PROBLEM 4 多图题请指出是从那副图得到的以下信息 如：二饼题。可用the left chart和the right chart表明是描写哪副图的具体情况 Bad example: “According to the pie chart, married which was 52.1%.” 两张图，这样的写法并不明显 PROBLEM 5 在IELTS Writing中不要使用缩写 Bad example: “It’s divided into four types as follows:…” 一定要写成： It was divided into four types as follows:…” PROBLEM 6 切记不要主观，尽量避免I，we这样的提法。 Bad example: “ Now from the two graphs，we can clearly know that…” 改成： “Now from the above two graphs, it can be clearly shown that…” PROBLEM 7 两饼之间对比不够，基本没有写出变化和倍数关系。 Good example from 贾宇光 “It should be noted that the figure of divorced people in 1996 was over 100 times