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翻译1：经常做运动会提高人的自信 错误的句子：Exercise regularly can rise ones confidence. 错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰 错误2 rise 不及物动词 正确的句子：Regular exercise can increase ones self-confidence. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence) 可以用定语从句扩充： Participating in sports frequently can boost peoples confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 翻译2：依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力（mental arithmetic）。 错误的句子：Rely heavily on calculators will have negative impact on human beings` mental arithmetic. 错误1 rely 是动词，不能充当主语 错误2 impact 可数名词，要有冠词。 错误3 human beings 多余，不是人类莫非是动物么？ 正确的句子： Relying heavily on calculators will have a negative impact on mental arithmetic. 句子结构： 主语+及物动词+宾语(impact) 也可以用现在分词扩充： The excessive reliance on calculators is likely to have an adverse impact on childrens mental arithmetic , thereby posing a threat to their intellectual development. 翻译3：很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里（male-dominated world ）找工作。 错误的句子：A number of girks are not willing to hunting jobs in the male-dominated world 错误1 willing to do something 固定搭配 错误2 a number of 在这里感觉是在某个地方，有一些女孩不愿意做什么。 错误3 定冠词不恰当，因为世界上男人居多的行业有很多，不可能特指1 个。 正确的句子：Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world. 句子结构： 主语+系动词+表语(willing) 也可以用状语从句扩充： Numerous women are unwilling to find employment in a male-dominated world because they can face barriers to top-level promotion. 翻译4 ：环境问题已经成为公众关心的焦点。 错误的句子：environmental problem has been the focus of public concern. 错误1 problem 可数名词，要加冠词或者复数 错误2 be 是表示“是”的意思，强调状态，要用“become”，强调变化 正确的句子：The environmental problem has become the focus of public concern. 句子结构： 主语+系动词 （become）+表语 （the focus ） 翻译5：家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间。 错误的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 错误1 make an effort to 固定表达 错误2 curb 一般是抑制某种行为，而不是接time. 错误3 “watching TV on children ”也不通。 正确的句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(efforts) 翻译6：艺术不属于学校的主科