2011年湛江一模《生命中不能没有你》作文指导（Zhanjiang in 2011 the first mock exam cant live without you writing guide）.docVIP

2011年湛江一模《生命中不能没有你》作文指导（Zhanjiang in 2011 the first mock exam cant live without you writing guide） Zhanjiang in 2011 the first mock exam essay Guide Read the following text and write on request. The poet said to the poet, there is no man without you in my life; the rider said to the horse, I cannot live without you; the forest said to the sun, I cannot live without you....... Please write a composition with the title life without you. Requirements: optional angle, custom style (except Poetry), word number not less than 800. A, i: Life without you is a sentence that contains four aspects: 1, whose life? -- mine, hers?...... 2, life, is the process of life, not anything else; life should not be a short time, it should be a long time! At least through a period of time. 3, must have, can not or lack! - to point out the extent of the need, whether or not it can not be, very strong. 4, you, second person, or can be understood as a rhetorical device. You can refer to the material as well as to nourish the life of my flesh. It can also refer to the spirit and nourish the life of my mind. Therefore, this you should be a very important and valuable thing, not a general object! It can refer to water, air, sunlight, food, or family, books, or qualities...... It can either be what you need in life, or what you love and what is useful to you -- what is necessary in your spiritual realm. So, the you is the object to be pointed out, and points out the specific name of you; It can not be plural, because modern Chinese you and you are different, only you can be used in the plural. So you cant describe several different kinds of you at the same time. It would be wrong to assume that a few you are for various purposes, or that they are juxtaposed. The full text can only write a you. Only the full text focuses on writing a you, in order to allow content to highlight, in order to thoroughly elaborate the center, profound. So: you are not equal to you, it, he; The whole subject can be und