作文修改5（Composition Amendment 5）.docVIP

作文修改5（Composition Amendment 5） Composition Amendment 5 (Sun Jinhai, 2003. 5, 28-6, 3) First, the following paragraph, the topic is not uniform, how should change?. Family planning is conducive to improving the quality of the population. Fewer children, parents have to be relaxed, so that parents and children together time also increased, due to reducing the burden of the family, a family travel is also possible, not only happy, the children also benefit from the growth of a lot of knowledge. Isnt that a color of life, too? 1, change the parents to parents. 2, in not only physical and mental pleasure before parents. Two. Here is the excerpt from a poster from a bookstore. In addition to the content, there are some mistakes in punctuation, words and sentence meaning. After reading, finish 1, 2, two questions. (1) our shop has just come to the newly published novel human right path. (2) the book has a hardcover and paperback version two, (3) the hardcover book covers, illustrations, exquisite printing, quality first-class (4). (5) for communication between the author and the reader, (6) writer Zhou Meisen invited the famous signature books for readers. (7) the place is sold on the two floor literary works. (8) readers are welcome to communicate with each other and take part in it. 1, there are defects around (only fill in serial numbers), (3), (5), (6), (7). 2, choose three corrections. A\ (only fill in the serial number) (3) sentence to: cover, illustrations, printed attention. B\ (only fill in the serial number) (5) sentence: to strengthen the link between the author and the reader. Or: to communicate the thoughts and feelings of the author and the reader. C\ (only fill number) (6) the words: Zhou Meisen invited the famous writer for readers to sign books. D\ (only fill in the serial number) (7) sentence: the place is on the two floor literary works counter.. Three, the following is a student written proposal, after careful reading, according to the requirements of t