广东基础写作主题呈现几种方式.ppt

* 基础写作 素材信息的呈现几种方式 主题的呈现方式 介词有: about, on, as to, concerning, regarding, with respect to, with the theme/topic of等。 定语从句有:whose topic/theme is... 或the topic/theme of which is... 【例1】 Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on/about/concerning/regarding “Who is your idol”. 【练习】 Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, （我国中小学生近视问题）________________________________________ concerning the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. 观点的呈现方式 短语有:according to sb.(根据某人的看法,较多用第三人称), in one’s view/opinion(在某人看来), as for sb.(在某人看来)等。 句型有:sb. believes/thinks..., sb. told us that..., sb. pointed out that..., It is one’s belief that... 等。 【例1】 As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life. 【例2】 According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world. 比例的呈现方式 1. 百分比 “百分之几”可用以下方式表达,如70% of the... (注意:最易漏用of) 2. 分数 分子是基数词,分母是序数词。如1/4: one fourth;2/3: two-thirds; 7/8: seven-eighths 3. 其他比例形式 1/2(50%)/half of the... 1/4 (25%)/a quarter of 3/4 (75%)/three quarters of 五分之三：three out of five∕three in everyfive 排序的呈现方式 短语有:rank/come/be+(the+)序数词;be the+形容词最高级+范围;be + in + 序数词 + place 【例1】 As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the last for the boys. 【练习】 According to Professor Wang, slightly more than 50% of the school children in our country are short-sighted, （排世界第一） __________________________________________. ranking/which ranks the first in the world 建议的呈现方式 短语:advise sb. to do sth. 从句:(1) sb. suggests that... (2)sb. gives sb. a suggestion that... 　(3)It is suggested that... (4)sb. give sb. some advice on... (5)It is highly advisable that... 【例1】 He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities. 【练习】上句改写同义句1： 改写同义句2 ： He gave us a suggestion that school children should avoid overusing their eyes and take mor