English Writing (青岛17中).pptVIP

Voices from experts 阅卷老师在评阅时最注重的是文章中的亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达上的亮点是取得优秀的关键，亮点主要包括：一、语言地道、词汇丰富；二、语法结构多样；三、文章连贯自然。 范文开头句 Voices from experts 好的开头和好的结尾会首先吸引阅卷老师的注意。 1.开头要紧扣主题，开门见山。 2. 尽量用一到两句话引出主体部分。 3.结尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激励或建设性。 如果中间内容抓住要点表述正确，再恰当地使用一些过渡性词语，使文章结构严谨、自然流畅，文章的总体档次就上去了。 09年全国各地高考范文开头句统计 09年全国各地高考范文结尾句统计 Faced with this severe problem, the government should take firm/urgent action to decrease the traffic accidents. In my personal opinion, it would be a good idea to develop adequate public transportation which is effective and punctual.Meanwhile, we should appeal to people to follow traffic rules, and get tough with drunk drivers. Last but not least, drivers should stick to the speed limit and drive safely. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world and enjoy a happier life. Thanks for your kind attendance! 中国每年都会有几十万起交通事故，许多人都因此而丧生。据2009年有关部门统计，中国的交通事故还在成倍地上升。请针对这一社会问题谈谈造成这种状况的主要原因并提出解决的方法。 注意： 1、词数120----150； 2、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3、参考词汇：drunk driving醉酒驾驶；the speed limit限速 ？ Extended  No one could have failed to notice the fact that thousands of people lost their lives annually in China, owing to several hundred thousand traffic accidents. A survey conducted in 2009 showed that the car accident are still on the rise at a very high rate. A number of factors account for the high increase of the traffic accidents. Firstly, the fast growing number of private cars contribute to severe traffic jams, making it more likely for car accidents to happen. Secondly, drunk driving may be a deadly killer. Thirdly, some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast. version * * 掌握写作技巧 增添表达亮点 青岛十七中 李景新 2009年山东省高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求 第一档（优秀）26分-29分 紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，有效使用连接成分，显示出较强的语言运用表达能力；语言小错不超过4个，不能有一处大错。 第二档（良好）22分-25分 紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达；大错不超过3个。 第三档（一般）18分-21分 紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。