cet4四级写作6：常见错误及修正.ppt

四级写作常见错误及修改 四级作文中的常见错误 1. 词层面 1.1 用词搭配不恰当 However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However, the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it. The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English. The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be poorer if one cannot speak English. . In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased. In recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. In the past few years, the consumption of grain has decreased by nearly 20%. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting heavier and heavier. 1.2 修饰语不当 He neither speaks English nor Chinese. He speaks neither English nor Chinese. Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately. Without television, people cannot immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world. . At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons. When I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatly improved. Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, people’s living standard has greatly improved. To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is essential. To improve one’s writing skill, one must make a regular practice. 1.3 把形容词和介词误用作动词 This term we’ll very busy. This term we’ll be very busy. The cave like a room very much. The cave looked very much like a room. I very like this novel. I like this novel very much. 1.4 少用连词 I started to play table-tennis in middle school, stil