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GRE Analytical Writing Qing Zhao 模考资源 Priced test prep Score it now! (ETS website) $13, 改两篇文章Free test prep— POWERPREP Software, Version 3.1 Chinese software AWP 练习软件评分办法 题目分类 (题材 vs.主题) 按题材/学科分类--政治, 历史, 教育… 合并论据 目的:扔题 深入准备40-50个题目 Issue 按题材教育学习类没有同时出现过行为类跨学科不要扔只扔一种找中心词附加成分提炼初步提纲 写作checklist 有没有写跑题 是否在文章开头提出自己的核心观点? 有没有完整的结构? 开头, 结尾是否齐备? 文章中间是否有2段以上中间段落? 每个中间段落是否都有主题句? 每个段落是否都有理由和事例支持你的观点? 是否合理的使用了transitional words? 文章中是否使用了至少6种句式变化? 结尾是否重申了自己的观点? 文中是否有语法错误: 拼写错误, 大小写错误, 主谓不一致, 时态错误, 指代不清等. 写作顺序是否是 开头, 结尾, 中间段落主题句, 中间段落论证 写作基本要素—审题和说理结构 审题3个步骤 核心论点 分支观点 理由和例子 分支观点展开—4步骤--展开一个分支观点 (每个段落5-7句) 表明说明 理由: Some of the existing problems are so important that without appropriate solutions, people cannot survive in a society 举例子, 解释例子: E.g unemployment/health care 是一个existing problem. Subprime crisis 验证—说明为什么这两个问题值得管: Unemployment, health care 要管因为 need to survive + transitional words 立场: It is not enough. It is also important that the government invest in long term research 理由: Such researches have a great potential of helping our future generations, solving anticipated problems 举例子, 解释例子: E.g educational research, medical research 验证—说明为什么这两个问题值得管: Both researches generates great leverage to support our future generations Issue 作文结构: 论证结构 直线结构 好就是好不建议采用 平衡论证 有利有弊利等于弊折中观点 正反论证 有利有弊利大小于弊有倾向性 支持题目观点 反对题目观点 作文结构: 注意 中间第一段都写题目观点合理之处 (先扬) 段落之间, 观点之间逻辑路标 让步, 递进, 转折 写作习惯, 开头结尾中间段落 模板 -- Thesis sentence 1. 正反结构--有倾向性 让步语气句型 It is true that…but… It is undeniable/obvious that….. However, …. Although the …of…is widely ackownledged, its potential…is worth careful consideration in my point of view. 2. 平衡结构--折中 The issue of/that…calls for a balanced perspective on… (a balance in which there are both AB) It is true that…but…is (equally)… It is undeniable/obvious that… However, ….is (equally)… 模板: Introduction (one paragraph) Background+Position (not recommended) Example+Position (not recommended) Old Saying+Position (not recommended) Controversy+Position Question+Answer