小升初英语作文训练以及即兴演讲训练课件.ppt

作文专题 Page ? * 作文要有中心思想。第一句体现中心思想。 作文要有内容。第二段内容中体现时间，地点，人物，事情等。 作文要有升华，最后一段得总结提升。 内容采用总分总的形式 Page ? * 1.角色 1. 构想演讲中有（些）什么？——人物，动物，食物，生活用品，家具，… 2.?这些事物的特征？——数量，颜色，服饰，形状，位置，… 2.角色行为 5.?这些人或物在做什么？——发挥自己的想象力 6.??行为的结果和影响怎样——好不好（不）可爱，（不）快乐，（不）累， 3.场景 3. 在什么地方？——海滩，公园，房间内，操场，教室，医院，商场… 4. 场景中所呈现的天气，时间怎样？——晴，阴，雨，雪，冷，热，早晨， 中午，下午，晚上 Page ? * 学会整合 梦想自己有一只小宠物，是一只绿色的熊猫， 我的妈妈是一个老师，我的爸爸是一名警察 周末，我和好友一起去公园玩 圣诞节，我收到了一份礼物，那是一只小宠物，这就是我开心的一件事。（教师节，我送给老师一个小礼物，母亲节…) 我最喜欢的食物是西红柿，因为多吃青菜有助于身体健康。 My favorite vegetable is tomato, because it is healthy food. 我假期里和妈妈一起去动物园，去电影院看电影，我最喜欢看功夫熊猫, 熊猫是我最喜欢的动物。 On my holiday, I go to the zoo with my mom. I see many animals… . We go to the cinema to watch film. I like watching kung Fu Panda. I like pandas. Page ? * 时间：morning. Monday, weekend, June. summer, last year, Holiday. 8:00 地点：my home, school, classroom, on the street, bookstore, library, museum, police station, cinema, supermarket, hospital. park/zoo, 角色：family, myself, teacher, nurse, doctor, worker, neighbor, classmate, friend, pet（fish，bird，dog，panda, monkey…） 事情：hobbies, dream, exam, love, pollution, money 动词：teach/study (learn), play, smile/cry, help, rain/snow, touch, sing/dance 名词：party，city，clothes，sun/moon, stationary/tableware, color, food/fruit/vegetable, photo/picture, plants/animals, 形容词：happy, sad, tired, bored, excited, warm, cool, hot, cold, sunny, rainy, snowy, windy, colors, healthy, clever/smart, big/short/lazy/clean, beautiful, Page ? * On Sunday morning, it is sunny and warm, my mom takes me to the park, there are many flowers and plants. You can hear the bird is singing. You can see the fish is swimming in the pool. I play with my little sister. We are happy. 讲故事，先描述时间，天气，然后说地点，事件，简单明了。 Page ? * I have a big room. There is a blue bed in my room. There is a small desk. I do my homework on the desk. There is a computer in my room. The computer is new. There is a big closet in my room. There are some flower