【精选】情景作文练习12-15.ppt

假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。请你按照图片顺序，以“Community Service”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。 注意：1．文章开头已为你写好 2．词数不少于60 3．参考词汇：sports facilities体育设施 Step 1:审题 假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。 请你按照图片顺序，以“Community Service”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。 注意：1．文章开头已为你写好 2．词数不少于60 3．参考词汇：sports facilities体育设施 Step 2: * During the winter vacation, the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity in which all of us did our bit （做有益的贡献）for the community. ________________________________________________ 高考英语书面表达 第三档：12－14分 及格。基本完成了试题规定的任务。 ·覆盖了内容要点； ·运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求； ·语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档：6－11分 较差。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 ·漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容； ·所用句式和词汇有限； ·语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。 未能清楚地传达信息。 时态 人称 一次活动 During the winter vacation, the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity in which all of us did our bit for the community. visit old people do some cleaning clean the sports facilities pick up the litter put up decorations 找要点 talk with the old lady clean the table； clean the window； sweep the floor； cleaner, tidier； … sports center； provide sb. with a good exercise place； … step 3: 加细节 community park； look dirty； pick up the litter; a good environment put up a poster saying “Happy Spring Festival”； glue some paper cuts The ending: I think this activity is very meaningful. (孙菀遥） We felt the activity was very meaningful and interesting and we wanted to take part in it again. (付荔） I think this activity is not only meaningful but also help us improve our ability. (杨爱文） This is a meaningful activity that can make us realize that we have the responsibility to do some things for our community. （乔佳宾） We were so happy to take part in this activity, because it not only helped the community become more beautiful but also…. (王菁钰） points + details language Before writing: Read the instructions very carefully. (the person, tense and the topic) While writing: 审题 内容完整 语言准确 人称 时态