单老师高中英语写作指导课件.ppt

高考英语书面表达特训 一、弄清一个概念 一、弄清一个概念 总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式复杂多样 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组 adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever → wise → smart → bright → intelligent adj.令人惊奇的 surprising →amazing →astonishing 他昨天下午来的。 1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came here. 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 1.网上阅卷对卷面要求提高。 阅卷教师看电脑屏评分，屏幕上视觉比纸上印象更突出，每行高度约为直线格的2/3的作文视觉效果最佳，此类作文错误少并用有效连接成分就能高分。 2.中等水平学生容易成为最吃亏学生群。 高考阅卷特点，决定了阅卷时间短、速度快、赋分中庸。两极的考生优劣分明，容易赋分，而中等学生，如果出现书写潦草或低级错误容易出现得分趋低情况，成为最吃亏的一个群体。 3.书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股。 平均分：15分 峰值：17—19分 提升空间巨大 有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。 1. People grow rice in the south of China. Rice is grown in the south of China. 2. They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986. One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986. 二、将陈述句改为倒装句。 I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time. Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time. 2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time. Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes. 三、将简单句改为强调句 Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents. 3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday. 四、将两个简单句合并为并列句 1.You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it. you I must do it. 2.I want to buy this bike. I don’t have enough money.