2014-2015-1第一次作文评讲.doc

2014-2015-1第一次作文评讲 Directions: Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown/your campus/China(多题多卷), what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? (2014年6月英语四级作文真题) Outline： 1.What is the place? A brief description. 2.Why do I recommend this place? Reason 1 2 3 3.Summary/Personal opinion Para.1 ①If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to Qufu. When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as follows/below. （金融一班 候燕婷 金融二班 黄婵婵 孙文雅 万玉荣 网媒二班 管青霞 张红亮）/②If my foreign friend comes to China, the most interesting place I would like to take her to（see/visit) is Luoyang. （金融二班 杨莹 杨福雅 韩紫洁 王能 张云龙 万青青 魏孝娜 余茜茜）/③ Para. 2 ①The reasons are as follows．/②There are several reasons for my recommendation. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly/In addition,..;（至少写两点） Para.3 ①I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. No better place can be chosen than Qufu in my hometown. （金融一班 候燕婷 网媒二班 管青霞） ②I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Luoyang.（网媒一班 胡世坤）③I believe that my foreign friend will satisfy with my arrangement.（网媒一班 刑丽洁）④I believe my foreign friend will find it interesting and enjoyable. (金融二班 孙文雅 王能 万青青 余茜茜) Sample 1 Suppose a foreing friend of mine is coming to visit China, I will take her to visit my hometown, which is the most interesting place in China. There are three reasons for recommending Luoyang. First, Luoyang is a famous old city in China. It contains fruitful historical culture. In ancient times, numerous famous people had lived in Luoyang. Second, it is worthwhile to visit Chinese Garden. In this place, I can show her different types of peony. Besides, many beautiful flowers are planted in this garden. Last but not least, I definitely take her to the old city. When it turns black, the lantern will light. A lot of delicious snacks will attract her eyes, such as Bufan Soup, candied haws on