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修改建议：课文要求讲广西文化，而整篇简述《七剑下天山》故事，需说明与广西文化的关系。如果要讲梁羽生，建议讲他、他的武侠小说和广西文化的关系。Unit 1 Text4Seven SwordsmenQijian Xia Tianshan,Seven Swordsmen?is a?novel by?Liang Yusheng. Chen Wentong?(5 April 1926 – 22 January 2009), better known by his pen name?Liang Yusheng as a Chinese writer, was born in a family of scholars in?Mengshan County?in?Guangxi?Province, （1. 最后的标点 “,” 不对。 2.第一句和第二句逻辑关系处理不当，第二句还可再简明。）Credited as the pioneer of the New School (新派) of the?wuxia?genre in the 20th century, Chen was one of the best known?wuxia?writers in the later half of the century, alongside?Jin Yong?and?Gu Long.(credited as---用法不妥； Chen 还是Liang要注意，毕竟，Jin Yong和Gu Long也是笔名；这一句和前面到底什么关系？) (本文有必要不痛不痒地提Jin yong和Gu Long吗？)(可否这么写： Liang Yushen is the pen name put by Mr. Chen Wentong on his books of popular wu xia stories or stories about the legendary Chinese knighthood. Interestingly, his readers may hardly know about Chen Wentong, with the name of Liang Yushen on their lips though. As a rare prolific genius, Mr. Liang Yushen revolutionizes the old wu xia genre by injecting his own elements that exert profound influence over other writers of this kind either in Hongkong, Mr. Liang’s residence, or Taiwan or the Mainland. Among his works, “Qijian Xia Tianshan” is recognized as a masterpiece, which narrates what happens to seven legendary Mt. Tianshan-based heroes and heroines. )(我的译文时态采用一般现在时。)The prologue（n.序幕性事件） serves as a continuation of Yang Yuncong and Nalan Minghuis story in?Saiwai Qixia Zhuan, set in the earlyQing dynasty. Nalan is forced to marry the?Manchu?prince?Dodo?even though she loves Yang and has borne Yang a daughter. Yang shows up on the night before Nalans wedding and seizes their infant daughter from her. He is mortally (adv.致命地) wounded in a fight against Prince Dodos henchmen(n.心腹). Before his death, he entrusts his daughter to the youth Liang Mulang, who was attempting suicide after being mistakenly accused of betraying his comrades. Mulang brings Yangs daughter back to Yangs te