医学论文标题的写作.ppt

Common errors (4) 问题：(1) 应尽量避免使用初步体会，初步研究，初步经验之类没有实际意义的词; (2) 除了像AIDS, DNA等已通用的缩略语外，标题中应尽量避免使用缩略语，如ALL应写全称；（3）尽量避免使用动词 Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia 或：Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia Common errors (4) 问题：(1) 应尽量避免使用初步体会，初步研究，初步经验之类没有实际意义的词; (2) 除了像AIDS, DNA等已通用的缩略语外，标题中应尽量避免使用缩略语，如ALL应写全称；（3）尽量避免使用动词 Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia 或：Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia Common errors (5) 3. 关于饮食中钾含量与血压关系的研究 Original: A research of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure Common errors (6) 问题：（1）具体的研究一般用study表述 (research一般作不可数名词处理，如much research has been done on…)；标题中如果研究一词前没有限定词，一般都省略，比较：A prospective clinical study of isoniazid-refampicin-pyrazinamide-induced liver injury in an area endemic for hepatitis；（2）表述过于繁琐 Revised: Dietary potassium and blood pressure Common errors (7) 为了满足标题写作的上述，有时对较长标题可采用副标题（subtitle）处理，如出现： 1.病例数时，如：对急症室连续170例腹痛病例的回顾性研究 Original: A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal pain in the emergency room Common errors (8) 问题：关键词不突出 Revised: Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study of 170 consecutive cases Common errors (9) 2. 研究性质或方法时，如： 用磁共振成象术对正常怀孕期间垂体增大进行活体内研究 Original: Use MRI to conduct an in vivo study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy Common errors (10) 问题：（1）关键词不突出；（2）过多使用了动词 Revised: Pituitary gland growth during normal pregnancy: An in vivo study using magnetic resonance imaging Common errors (11) 3. 并列结构时,，如：军队卫生防疫工作中出现的问题、原因与对策的初探 Original: A preliminary study on the problems, causes and countermeasures in health and epidemic prevention work of CPLA Common errors (12) 问题：（1）初探是多余的；（2）外国人知道CPLA吗？（3）主题不够突出 Revised: Military health and epidemic prevention: Problems, causes and countermeasures Common errors (13) 4. 解释性用词时，如