科技英语翻译-期中练习.pptVIP

Translation of English for Scientific and Social Purposes Lesson 6 Task for Group 6 中设江苏机械设备进出口（集团）公司创建于1978年，是中国机械设备进出口集团的主要成员之一。 Original version: China Jiangsu Machinery Equipment Imp. Exp. (Group) Corporation (SUMEC) founded in 1978 is a key member of China Machinery Equipment Imp. Exp. (Group) Corporation (CMEC). Modified version: China Jiangsu Machinery Equipment　Imp. Exp. (Group) Corporation (SUMEC), founded in 1978, is a key member of China Machinery Equipment Imp. Exp. Corporation (CMEC). Task for Group 6 中设江苏机械设备进出口（集团）公司从事各类机、电、仪商品进出口业务已整整15个春秋。 Original version: We have been specialized in the import export business of various machinery, electrical, and instrumental products for 15 years. 译文第一段中have been specialized in ...,在语法上specialize in不能用被动语态,因为specialize in本身意为to limit all or most of one’s study, business, etc, to particular subjects(专业从事于),用主动语态,句子的主语才能成为动作的触发者,如:She’s a lawyer who specializes in divorce cases.(她是专门办离婚案的律师) 第一段和第二段译文中两次出现machinery, electrical and instrumental products，存在并列修饰词形态不一致的问题?products之前的三个词都应该是形容词,但machinery却是名词,意为“机器”(总称),系用词不当?把machinery改为mechanical,就能与product搭配了? Modified version: SUMEC has been specializing in importing exporting various mechanical, electrical and instrumental products for 15 years. Task for Group 6 15年来，我们感谢世界五大洲100多个国家和地区的工商界朋友的广泛支持和通力合作，公司进出口业务稳步、快速发展，已成为中国最大的机电商品进出口企业之一。 Original version: Thanks to the full support and cordial cooperation of industrial and commercial friends from five continents, one hundred odd countries and regions all over the world, our import export business has been developing steady and speedy in the past 15 years, that made SUMEC become one of the largest machinery electrical products import and export enterprises. “世界五大洲一百多个国家和地区的工商界朋友”,由于译者理解有误,被误译为“五大洲100多个国家和地区”在译文中变成了两个并列的地区?实际上,“100多个国家和地区”就在“五大洲”内? “one hundred odd+名词”的结构语法上也有误:1.这是非正规的用法;2. odd作为副词通常用在数字之后,有连字符链接,才能作定语,如:20-odd years;50-odd acres of land? 另外,译文中数字的写法前后不统一,有时写成阿拉伯数字,有时写成英语词? 汉语中有“工