北京卷情景作文1.docVIP

北京卷情景作文审题 1. 确定时态通常以过去时为主感言部分用现在时态。如果是计划或安排要将来时。 2. 基本信息：时间、地点、人物、事件、目的原因 3. 确定要点细节：旁边、细节的，。 二、 文章结构： Para 1：主题句（一句话点题：时间、地点、人物、内容） Today my classmates and I went to …to do…/ paid a visit to… Para 2活动过程）·Early in the morning …/ At 8 o’clock in the morning …. ·Upon arrival, we found …. ·Having done… (分词作时间状语) ·After that, I (we)… ·Late in the afternoon we…/ At 4:00 pm, we… Para 3: 结论（感言收获) 三、常用基本连接词 时间顺序 First …, then / next / after that …at last Early in the morning /At 8 o’clock in the morning Two hours later…/ In the middle of the day / at noontime Late in the afternoon … 劳动场面 分组活动 Some were (doing)…. (While) others were (doing)… Still others were (doing) The rest were (doing)…/ The boys… and the girls… 四. 语言素材(集体活动) 点题 On March 5th our class organized an activity to… During the winter vacation, the students in our community joined in the meaningful activity… Our class organized a day trip to… 出发 Early in the morning we gathered at the school gate and went there on foot. The next day, we set off early in the morning with high spirits and went there by bus. 到达 Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. On arriving there, everybody immediately began to work. 活动场面 We were in high spirits. Some students did… and some students did…, while others did…. Although the day was so hot that all of us were sweating, all of us was devoted to what we were doing ... Tired as we were, nobody stopped to have a rest. Time went by quickly. / Time flew! After we had completed the task, we… 活动感言 We were tired but happy… again. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment. We are so proud of our great work and we have decided that we will carry out the activity every year. (感到自豪) Though the cleaning was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this activity for ever.（虽然很难，很高兴） This job will provide me the chance to take part in social activities, which enables me to enrich my after-school life. （社会实践丰富了我的业余生活） We believe that o