高中英语二轮复习书面表达课件(32张ppt).ppt

如何运用“10句5步三段法”进行课堂教学 *考纲对考生要求 1、能根据文字、图表或图画提供的信息写短文； 2、能写出与语境连贯、结构完整的短文，清楚的叙述事情，明确表达自己的观点和态度。 3、能在写作中做到文体规范、内容清楚、结构完整、主题突出、语句顺当、用词恰当。 *考纲解读 写作要求考生具有扎实的语法知识、足够的词汇量、良好的语篇知识，包括谋篇布局、遣词造句、文体及修饰方面的知识。高考作文是一种控制性写作：对考生的时间（25~30分钟）字数（100~150字）；内容（目的、对象、时间、地点 、结果）；体裁（唯一性），格式都有限制。总之，要求考生能在有限的时间写出内容清楚连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出用词及文体恰当的书面表达。 *阅卷老师的兴奋点 1、层次清晰 2、用词精确，句式多变 3、内容连贯，表达地道，无明显错点 4、书写规范，卷面整洁 考标写作要求 写作的基本要求（四个词[] 书面表达提分策略 把握考标要求 了解评分原则 诊断失分类型 针对问题训练 评分维度 差异化指导 ?21-23分作文的学生 可以考虑从英语的地道性这一方面入手，写出让人感觉是老外写出的文章，而这个前提我认为就是要多读多背一些原汁原味的英语文章。 24—25 高分作文通常是行文流畅，过度自然，句型多变的文章。这样的文章很有英语的味道，也就是说句子很地道，很老练，符合英语的习惯。而且，文中往往会有出彩的句子，比如强调句，倒装句，主从复合句；或者是运用到了一些非谓语结构。还有一点很重要的是书法美，字迹清楚干净。 差异化指导 10分以下 10分以下如何上档次？ 运用“10句5步三段法”进行课堂教学 ?常见语言错误之词法错误 ?2. 误选词 ?’ll see you in (on) Monday morning. ?We are meeting in (on) May 18. ?My new friend is coming on next Thursday. ?She’s lived here since (for) three years. ?I went climbing for three times for (during) the winter holiday ?看报：look at a newspaper, ?变得更美丽：change more beautiful. ?参加篮球比赛：join the basketball match; ?参加英语俱乐部:join in the English club. .误 选词 ?John is a very usual name in Britain. ?We went on a journey round the city by bus. (We went on a bus tour round the city.) ?I’ve never met your sister---how is she (what she is like)? ?I have good relations ( a good relationship) with my classmates. ?It takes a few days to know (get to know) several students from other countries. ?My friend is two meters high.( tall) ?I have 16 years (am 16 That dress really matches (suits) you ?This is the right size—it suits (fits) me perfectly. ?I hope I can find a nice cloth to wear. (some nice clothes ?I watched (saw) a car accident yesterday. ?He said me (told me/ said ) that I was wrong. ?She explained me (explained to me ) the problem. ?I often hear (listen to) jazz at home. ?Young children are often frightening (frightened). ?Two people were wounded (injured) in the traffic accident. ?Anna has been