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The Principles of business writing exercises Clarity Task 1 Revise Antonella’s Fax into a clearer version. Task 2 Make the sentences clearer. 1 I have known Chan Wai Ming for five years, during which time he has proved to be an excellent worker, who takes pride in his work and who can be trusted to do what is required of him, and we have found him to be intelligent and energetic so we have no hesitation in recommending him for the position for which his is applying. 2 Enclosed please find details of our tender for the training contract with your organization which is divided into three sections devoted to Manpower, Materials, and Mode of Delivery, each of which we consider very important in terms of the effectiveness of any training program. Conciseness Task 3 Make the sentences more concise. 1 We intend to purchase new office furniture. We shall buy before the end of the financial year. 2 Our offices are quite small. The furniture would have to be compact. 3 We would like to consider CONFORM furniture. We wonder if you have a range that would suit our needs.