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2010高考（北京卷）情景作文样卷 NO.1 正文： Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. I was Li Hua. I was helped friends want a went to Beidaihe the weekend. 得分：0分 点评：未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。抄写所给句子不给分，翻译所给北京句子不给分。 NO.2 正文： Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. I went to the sowhome and Binguan and work. I’m go to shoupiaochu mad the piao and I help my weather the map, the sunglasses and. 得分：1分 点评：未完成试题规定任务。使用了拼音替代英语表达，没有任何正确或达意的句子。但是文中出现了相关词汇，如help, map，因此给一分。 NO.3 正文： My name is Li Hua, I helped my grandpa and grandma buy trip because them wants to go Beidaihe. First, I used the computer help them found imagain. The weather? The holtel? I’m very to hard. However, I’m very to busy, I help them picked bag. There are clothes and map two glasses. The end, I say goodbye with them. 得分：2分 点评：未完成试题规定的任务。但是，某些句子还是表达出了与任务相关的意思，如I used computer to…；以及个别词汇clothes, map。因此给2分。 NO.4 正文： Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. I help my parents in computer buy two tickets for them, and see the weather. I help my parents take the glasses, T-shirt and the Beidaihe map. Finally, I and my parents go to the train station, and my parent take the train, I say Have a good time! 得分：5分 点评：未完成试题规定的任务。词句单调，词汇贫乏，但是有内容，因此为五档上限。 NO.5 正文： Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. First, I made a tickets on the Online. In the stare time, my grandparents wanted to know what the weather was and where can live. Some days later, I went to the tain stop to get the tickets. After I come bake my house, I help them to pick the things which they needed. My grandma helped me to do it. The second day, I sended them leave Beijing. They were very happy. I think they will have a good time. I love them. 得分：7分 点评：未恰当完成试题规定的任务。第一、第三幅图因为语言表达的问题没有交代清楚主要内容，词汇、句式的使用比较有限，语言错误影响了对所写内容的理解。故为四档偏低分段。 NO.6 正文： Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. Worn-out as I was, but I felt pretty delighted