四级写作之漫画作文辅导.pptVIP

writing 写作概述 实际样例参考运用（模考分析+下发资料） 写作语法黄金结构 高分策略之词汇替换 高分策略之句型多样化 评分标准及建议 概述 1. 审题（1-2mins) 2. 构思提纲 (3-5mins，确定主题) 3. 写文章 (20mins) 4. 修改检查 (5mins) Steps pre-writing :仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题 Para.1: describe the picture 简要描述漫画（who, what, when, where… ） 开门见山 TIPS: 1.写作的directions 部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述， 切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！！！（模考作文问题一） TIPS: 2. 漫画的内容一定要符合图片， 切忌无中生有！！！（模考作文问题二） The boy thought deeply The boy feel ashemed and says nothing. The boy stops playing and learning a lot. The boy is making a plan and the grandpa is encouraing him para2：全文的核心段 give your opinion about the phenomenon conveyed in the picture and interpret its meaning/message? ?揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。 TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。 Para3.：give your conclusion. (a) 提出建议，重申观点 主题句 (b) 对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。 TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合 如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。 与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。 转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向 EXAMPLES 主题句：you should confirm every appointment when you do business in US. 主题句复述：In business circle in US, businessman usually makes sure every appointment. 2. 主题句：To perceive is more important than to judge. 主题句复述句：It is of great importance to perceive to judge. OR To perceive is no less important than to judge. 实例运用+模考分析 模考一 一、语法问题 1. 时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。 eg: 1.The boy play computer games and his grandpa watch him. 2. Play computer is a usual activity for university students. 3. Life plan must has a destination 4. If someone dont have a life plan... 2. 词性的使用错误 eg: 1. if you have a plan, you should work hardly. 2. so she is succeed at last/ a young people cant be success 3. we should face difficult bravely 4. we have many chooses 3. There be 句型使用错误 eg: 1. There are many young people waste time to do some boring things. 2. There have a problem in the future if we dont have life plan. 4. 被动语态的使用错误 eg: 1. as shows in the picture,the boy is... 2. everyone has a life plan, maybe n