作文表达课件.pptVIP

沁阳一中：席娟 Teaching aims 1. Explain the comprehension we did yesterday. 高考改卷英语作文中考生存在的突出问题： 1. 审题不细，随意发挥过多，偏离主题，文章结构失衡。 2. 分段意识不强，多数考生整篇文章一大段，要点模糊， 给阅卷带来难度。 3. 基础知识薄弱，语法错误（尤其低级错误）过多。 4. 不注意英语基本句式（汉语式英语），表达不到位 或不得体。 5.书面语过浓，故用较复杂的句式，刻意追求过难 句子和复杂结构。 高考英语书面表达基本策略: 仔细审题。 如果是看图写文，看懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。 2. 写要点。 据每幅图写出一至两句话。因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在10句话，120个词左右。 写要点。每句话写好后，用适当的连词 接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。 一, 高考英语书面表达基本策略: 3. 查错漏。 完稿后，检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正。 　　 4. 卷面整洁。 卷面整洁干净甚至比准确，通顺，简介更重要。因为整洁干净给阅卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然要给得高一些。 Common mistakes 1. There are more and more parents request their children to take all kinds of extra courses to develop the children’s ability. 5. The summer holiday ,to a certain extent, is a time when students should relax themselves, they can do everything what they want, and have a good time with their friends, or they will like to take part in some amusements and so on, but, more and more parents have been taking up the time of their babies to force them to go to extra courses. 总结大家经典句子 1.As far as I’m concerned, summer holiday is a time when children can relax themselves and broaden their horizons. 2.Considering children’s age and experience, it is necessary for parents to instruct them to develop what they are interested in truly. 3. With the development of society, the competition is becoming fiercer and fiercer. 4. As the saying goes: “all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” * 2. Tips on how to write an excellent composition. 3. Correct some common mistakes in our composition. 4. Admire one possible version. （2009·烟台一次调研） 暑假本来是孩子休息、玩耍的时间，但很多孩子 一放暑假，就被迫奔波于各个补习班之间，这其中虽 然有家长“望子成龙”的期望，但也有越来越激烈的社 会竞争的因素。请仔细观察该图画，就此发表自己 的观点。 要求：1.画中所涉及的内容须包含在内； 2.词数120~150。 参考词汇：补习班extra course 2. A mom with a guitar in one hand and the other hand pulled the child. 3. His son want not to take extra courses. 4. Compared to “forcing