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58) Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone. 这是一个因果命题，原因不成立，学习不仅是个人的事儿 还需要外界激励。 即使原因成立也推不出结论：就算学习是自己的事儿，也不能证明学习与外界激励无关。 Outline： 正：个人因素在学习中确实起到一个很重要的作用 有不适当的外界激励没用 反：但是学习不仅是个人的事儿 还需要外界激励，如果没有及时的外界激励 后果不堪设想 反：即使承认学习是自己的事儿，也推不出结论，学习与外界激励是有关的，但是需要正确的方法 合：学习需要个人和及时正确的外界相结合 才可以取得好的效果 Is learning just a matter of personal discipline and cannot be whetted by school or college causing a widely discuss nowadays. As for me, I confirm the importance of the personal discipline at learning while the effects school or college played cannot be simply ignored. It must be admitted that learning is firstly a matter of personal discipline without which nothing could play such a vital role in learning. Everyone holds his own mind, interest and discipline which may not be easily changed by others. We cannot force a child to learn or not learn. As a case in point, John, a friend of mine in my primary school time, had no interest in learning instead, he liked play games and sports. This of course irate the teachers, they assign a lot of homework for him and set a exam score standard for him. While he used the method that easily elude the teachers requirement that he copied others homework and cheat in exam. No matter what way the teacher motivated him, without his discipline, john never start to learn. Thus personal discipline is a critical factor in ones learning. However, the timely motivation of school and college may be still a primary matter for a student. If a child has no interests or motivation to study then what should the environment of him do? Only be a bystander or a helper? Just as mentioned above what would happened if the teacher never ask John to finish some studying work? John may play everyday without studying even without picking his pen to write! The consequence for him may be that he finally dropped out of school and played everyday which may lead him to be a bad guy to the society. In con