河北省2011年高考英语一轮复习指导 书面表达写作技巧课件精品.pptVIP

make sentences 3 determine what to write 1 copy 6 check 5 Writing steps: 4 edit 2 think out the key words * 1. 格式 2. 人称 3.时态 4. 要点 5.语法 6. 字数 7. 书写 * 书面表达（满分30分） 你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报， 主题为： 保护环境从我做起。 请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. * save electricity turn off the lights protect our forests use paper wisely not use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks use both sides of paper * Do you include enough information? use proper linking words? make any spelling or grammar errors? Is your handwriting clear enough to read? * * What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. To love the environment is to love ourselves. As to me, I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible. What’s more, never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. * In a word, with doing all these small things, we will not only improve our environment but also help make our world a better place to live in. * Rome is not built in one day. Practice makes perfect! * * 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 语言地道，规范 * a composition topic sentence （主题句） supporting sentences （扩展句） ending （结尾句 ） 过渡词：first, second, finally , and, besides, also, but, however, what’s more… * Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. * 一 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首. The boy is very hungry and he hurried home. Hungry, the boy hurried home. The boy, hungry, hurried home. * 二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换) A. 合并为简单句 把其中一