漫画作文课..pptVIP

We can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack. Three weeks later, he was asked to pay his medical fee before he left hospital. When he saw the bill, he got shocked and nearly fell onto the floor. The high fee was another heart attack to him. Nowadays , the medical fees are high. Many people are in debt to get medical fees. Some people can’t afford the heavy medical fees. They have to bear the pain of illnesses. It won’t be beneficial to our harmonious society. I think the medical expenses should be reduced. The government should build up an effective medical system. The hospital should put the benefits of the patients in the first place. We can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack. Three weeks later, he was asked to pay his medical fee before he left hospital. When he saw the bill, he got shocked and nearly fell onto the floor. The high fee was another heart attack to him. __________________, we can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack. Three weeks later, he was asked to pay his medical fee before he left hospital. When he saw the bill, he was shocked and could hardly stand on his own feet. The high fee was another heart attack to him. * Writing based on a cartoon Problems: 1. wrong structures 2. improper description 3.misunderstanding what the picture shows Step I Lead in Tasks: 1. To deal with problems in writing based on a cartoon 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing Step II An example How can we write a composition based on a cartoon? Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 A. Make an outline of the writing 1. 漫画内容 Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 2. 现象→后果 3