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2010.05.07考试作文纠错 1.Tom found a little boy fell over himself. 2.If I lifted it up, you would say it’s I who knocked it down. 3.According this passage…… 4.Parents are best teacherfor children. 5.In todays world,there are lots of teaching trouble in many family. 6.When a girl was on the ground,a boy wanted to give her a lift,but the boy’s mother provented him. 7.She will say it was you have done. 8.A bottle was falled厖 9.At present sociteny,many parents have any different ways to tell their children. 10.A little girl was fallen down. 11.Don’t help her! Her parents think is you ! 12.But on the other time,the parents are different! 13.The boy were about to let her up. 14.Her mother told he don’t to help her. 15.When the boy arrived home,saw a bottle broken down,he didn’t to care. 16.If I to care the bottle,you will say that me broken down the bottle. 17.One day Xiao Ming saw a man falled down the road,he went towards the man and want to help the man. 18.Others would think it was Xiaoming that made the man falled. 19.A bottle of tea on the ground was fall. 20.You would think it is me that made the bottle fallen if I take the bottle. 21.Because it is a good habitat to help others. 22.How believe it is? 23.A girl slide on the road when another boy acossing the road. 24.With time goes by,the boy become another one. 25.Why the boy is not when his was. 26.The picture I describes a girl on a road,may be someone yun across her. 27.The picture 2 describes the bottle’s water is running . 28.Nowadays,there be many events about education. 29.He saw a little girl falling down and crying. 30.I can’t held it,or you will say that I falled it down. 31.This may be a joke,but it have a great manage. 32.Parents should set a example to their children. A girl slipped, a boy want to help her, but his mother said can’t help her because other people would think she slipped because of him. A girl are fall down. a boy want to help her, … He regardless of it. At the park , They playing games. The