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The Popularity of Micro-blogging 1．近年来“微博”越来越流行，许多人利用“微博”来表达心声、交流想法。 2．微博流行的原因。 3．微博可能引起的弊端。 ? 【范文】 Micro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life. As for me, many factors contribute to the widespread of Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer in-time comfort. However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably some concerns. We should be careful while using it. ? 【点评】 第一段直接切入主题。首句在说明微博越来越流行时没有用肯定句micro-blogging is more and more popular, 而是用否定句的方式“负负得正”。 从第二段开始阐释流行的原因。Contribute to是固定词组，表示为……作出贡献，其对应的名词是contribution。第一个原因是微博方便人们在任何时候表达他们当时的感觉。这里通过“at any time”和“instant feeling”突出了微博和传统博客的区别。第二个原因是微博可以减压。此处release表示释放，除了跟release pressure, release stress, 还可以跟release news。 第三段描述了微博的弊端，give away表示出卖，同义词有betray。最后一段是作者的对微博的态度，在充分肯定微博积极意义的同时提醒人们要谨慎使用微博。 Food Safety 1．??? 食品安全问题令人担忧。 2．??? 对此，你有什么看法（可从蔬菜、水果滥用农药、激素方面分析）？ ? 【范文】 Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue. First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers’ health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed. All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should