四六级段落写作.pptVIP

段落写作 段落结构 例如： Diligence is the key factor of success. Diligence gives every man and woman, every boy and girl, proper work to do. Many men have become great because of their hardship. Diligence can make a fool wise and a poor man rich. Thus, we know that diligence is important to our work and life. 段落结构特点： 1）只有一个主题句 2）主题句一般在段首 3）发展句必须服务于主题句 4）如果必要，以结论句重述段落主题 2. 写作模式 （1）扩张（deduction） （过渡词）发展句1 主题句 （过渡词）发展句2 （过渡词）发展句3 In fact, fresh water on the globe is quite limited. On the one hand, the growing population and rapid development of industrialization demand more consumption of fresh water. On the other hand, sources of fresh water are reportedly polluted due to inefficient control of industrial and life waste. （2）收拢（Induction） （过渡词）发展句1 （过渡词）发展句2 结论句 （过渡词）发展句3 The sun was slowly rising in the east and the air was fresh. As the thin cloud spread apart, the sun shone brighter and brighter. Everyone in the park was enjoyable . Taking an early morning walk makes a man healthy. （3）先扩张后收拢 （过渡词）发展句1 主题句 （过渡词）发展句2 结论句 （过渡词）发展句3 Bicycles have become more and more popular in China. Wherever you go, you may find many people riding on bicycles. During the rush hour, you can often see a boiling sea of bicycles in all directions. And China is sometimes called the kingdom of bicycles as it has the largest number of bicycle rider with millions of bicycles made every year. All these show that bicycles are the important and popular means of transportation in China. 3. 怎样写好主题句 1）主题单一 例如： “ Trees and Man” 方法1 （1）树的种类很多而且对人类都有用。 （2）爱惜树的人用木材制造种种器物，而 不爱惜树的人却在乱砍乱伐。 （3）人口越来越多而森林却越来越少。 方法2 （1）树在很多方面都有助于人类。 （2）但是许多人没有认识到树的作用。 （3）为了保护环境，人类应种植更多的树。 （1）Trees help man in some important ways. （2）In many parts of the world, however, people have not realized that trees are useful. （3）In order to protect our environment, we should plant more trees. 2）表达思想明( Controlling Idea ) Smok